#for example the scene im working on now ive rewritten 4 times already....

[ddeongies]

OH YOU DID NOT TWEET THAT PICTURE OF RYU AND THEN REFERENCE IT IN THIS CHAPTER. I HATE YOU SO MUCH. THAT TWEET SENT ME INTO A FUCKING CRISIS AGAIN FUCK AHHHHH. 

“Also, feel free to pull my hair if you want. It lets me know I’m doing a good job.” - this line is fucking feral. so many lines in that section are insane in the best way possible. 

i’m gonna go kms now after reading the smut part holy shit. you also really do have such a talent for writing asking for consent in like the sexiest way possible. truly. 

this chapter was a perfect mix of smut and cute little relationship things. i love how much pining yeji does this time around. yes nmau yeji, ryujin’s whisker dimples are killers. i think yeji is also learning that when rye gets comfortable with those she cares about, she gets giggly and excited and becomes the little shit we all know and love. i love that you added that in here too. their little interactions in the snow and then valentines day not date were so cute. it sounds like they’re getting closer and closer to the same page, one of them just needs to bring up the conversation of making it an official relationship. i can’t wait to see when and how that conversation happens and who makes the first move being that vulnerable. i don’t wanna yap too much but i am really enjoying this. you definitely put a lot of thought and care into your writing and it really shows. 

keep up the good work! 🌼🖤

here lemme just bring them back since i'm answering this so late :P just so everyone knows what you're talking about 😇

the “pull my hair” line is insane i’ll admit it LMAO but i can’t control her??? she does what she wants? nmau yeji is sweet and soft but she has a feral side too (that we only get to see a little bit of bc the fic is rated M 😁)

and thank youuuu i feel like there are so many ways to write explicit consent and keep it hot, it’s a mandatory part of smut for me tbh (even in choreo when they had a bit more of a gray area going on i swear it was there)

yes! the main point of this chapter is the start of this new phase where they’re doing this pseudo FWB, pseudo unlabled relationship thing. like sometimes it’s gonna be steamy, sometimes it’s gonna be sweet, and it’s always gonna be a little bit overwhelming 

and GOD i love ryu when she’s hyper and giggly and mischevious and all that i’m so glad we’re getting to see more of her in nmau at this point :)

hopefully you will like the payoff bc we’re slowly but surely getting there!